Letter of Intent

So, for school, I have to create a letter of intent. This must include my definition of success, what beauty means to me, what accomplishment I am most proud of and why and how will I contribute to the industry after graduation..
Here it is, please offer some feed back
thanks :D

Success and beauty are two very powerful forces within our world. They seem to be the driving forces behind the majority of people. Many believe that without them, their lives are futile. Because of this, these two forces have gained a grip upon society unmatched by any else. I hope to be a light in a dim world. It is my desire to emulate beauty and success from the inside out. This, I dream to become contagious to the world around me.


Success is a very personal issue. To some, success is ample money, power, or fame. Success is often determined upon how much one has gained. I believe that success is doing the best one can with what they have for as long as possible. Success for me in the career field I have chosen will be in knowing that I have impacted someone’s life in a very positive manner.

Beauty is certainly in the eye of the beholder. It is incredible how two people can stand in front of the same creation and asses very different perceptions of such. This is a conundrum of humanity. I believe that beauty is found within the heart of a person; all outward beauty is an accessory to such. As a skin care professional I will have the opportunity to skillfully offer incredible assets to one’s personal beauty.

It is my goal to offer the beauty industry something it has never seen coming. I want to offer all people the opportunity for beauty. I am researching opportunities to serve the world around me. These include helping unfortunate women gain confident footing within the community again with a gained understanding of how to care for ones self as necessary in culture. As well, I have a dream to open a school in an underprivileged area. This school being offered to those as an option out of a world on the streets. Connecting with community partners to create a brighter future for those around them.

Throughout my life some have claimed that my goals are far too outlandish. I did not grow up within the best of conditions. My abilities never really outshone those around me. I however did the very best I could. I graduated high school when I was 16 years of age(one year ahead of scheduled time). Within two months, denied state scholarship opportunities and moved 1,000 miles away to attend a college that I thought was best for me. I was chosen to travel the country with a team of students representing our college. This helped with tuition. I did this while working and attending class full time. I maintained my GPA throughout my education experience. Within four years I had married an incredible man and graduated. I believe that anyone can accomplish anything given the proper drive. My ambition is found in helping others help themselves. I do not seek to live my life gaining success only for myself. I aim to enlighten others to the success and beauty found cultivating inside each one of us.